The wealth of nation depends on the health of its citizens. Yet, modern knowledge based economies of the world, education is more and more seen as the main force in the development of all countries. Discuss
Over the last decade, the wealth of many countries has significantly increased the world over. While some believe that this welfare of a country depends on the peoples’ health, others think that it is based on the education. This essay is an attempt to analyse both sides without any prejudice.
On the one hand, healthy living of people is considered to be the real wealth of the society because it correlates to the economy. The reason is if the citizens are strong and not prone to any diseases then the governments are not necessarily to spend a huge sum on improving medical facilities. For ...
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