Do you agree or disagree with following statement?
Young people can enjoy more life than older people do.
No one can deny the fact that young people have great energy and enthusiasm to live life than older people. It is my firm belief that young people enjoy more life than older do as the younger one take more risk to live adventurous life which give them happiness and excitement to live at the fullest. I will develop my reasons in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, It is important that you need more power and strength to do any work. The young people have lots of sources of energy to do risky task. From my personal experience I learned that when you were child or young you were very curious about to learn creative and innovative things which make you feel very joyful. For instance, when I was in college, I went in much summer campus and did many risky activities with others which helped me in my personal life and also, I met many peoples around the countries during traveling which helped me to understand about new culture and their foods.
Another major consideration is that young people learn new accomplishment easily as compared to older one. For example, my niece is just 16 years old and she built a robot by using highly high-tech technology which would not possible to learned by older people, since older people need more time to learn new procedure from internet sources even they cannot adopt easily contemporary life style. This indicate that younger people more creative than older and creativeness will keep alive the more strength in person which facilitate in enjoying life.
Nonetheless, older people have peaceful life which provides serenity in life. As older one have not much responsibilities, they could enjoy peaceful and happier life. Whereby responsibility, younger people always put themselves in completing the fulfillment of their children’s, parents, other people's requirement. But, the advantages of being young adult live full enjoyable life than older one overweight on drawbacks.
In summary, for all the reasons exposes above, it can be said that young people have sufficient knowledge, power to make happy life instead being seat at one place and think about life. People do variety of work if they have caliber to do and get more exposure from organization, which gives them high incentives to enjoy life at fullest. Therefore, these numerous reasons make me believe that young people enjoy life more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in summary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97215189873 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58808000265 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521518987342 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8035906459 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.529411765 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2352941176 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444306139953 0.236089414692 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169966760032 0.076458572812 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808352185936 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276751622644 0.150856017488 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492066320242 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.