A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away.
You want to give your friend some information about the flat.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
• give information about the flat
• provide any important instructions
• say what he/she should do if there are any problems
Dear Jame,
Hope you are doing okay!
Just writing this to provide some information about my apartment. It is easy to locate, just look for the brick red
building at the corner, after reaching ABC street. My flat is on the fourth floor, Unit-402. Unfortunately the stair-lift
is broken and you might have to climb a few steps if it is not fixed by your arrival date.
I would like you to do a couple of things for me, until you are here. Firstly, water the plants located in the balcony,
generally they need water on every alternate day. My second ask is to operate the washing machine only at 30 as it takes funny turms
on any temperature higher than that.
I can not foresee any issue during my absence but you know you can call me at any time on my mobile phone.
See you soon...
Cheers,
Sumit
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| 2021-05-13 | elham mousavi | 73 | view |
| 2020-10-26 | Sumitkoch85 | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jame, Hope you are doing okay! Just writing...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...water the plants located in the balcony, generally they need water on every alter...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 680.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53333333333 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26897921248 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.726666666667 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7020150622 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5555555556 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196416935999 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677094097762 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057101939158 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730281490884 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448573197337 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.