Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect.
Write a letter to the editor regarding this. Include the following in your letter:
– How you know about this city/town
– What information was incorrect
– What the editor should do about this.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this to provide feedback about the article about XYZ city insights published in TOI newspaper on 26/10/2020 under exploring new Town/City section.
As a resident of the city, I would like to express my gratitude for appraising the city by writing about it in your esteemed newspaper.
The information about city monuments, temples and other tourist attraction was well captured. Besides tourist attractions, We would like to appreciate the way our town is projected as one of the future investment opportunity with maximum returns.
Overall article was excellent and well structured but unfortunately, there was a small glitch observed, instead of mentioning that our town has a majority of white-collar employees it was mentioned as blue-collar. I may be overthinking but it might impact the future investments in the field of education and retail. This is because institutes or malls will not find enough staff and clients for their operation.
Should this is an issue, please highlight the same in your next week edition as a small correction. In case you feel, I can be of any assistance in this subject please feel free
to write back on the sender's address mentioned on the envelope.
Thanks for your understanding and support.
yours faithfully,
Sumit Kochhar
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2022-02-21 | Adlen DSouza | 100 | view |
| 2022-02-21 | Adlen DSouza | view |
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... for your understanding and support. yours faithfully, Sumit Kochhar
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...anding and support. yours faithfully, Sumit Kochhar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, may, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2619047619 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98127565568 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661904761905 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.223703191 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.454545455 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292864032805 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864343797402 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690600321186 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112294249791 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749032097561 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.