Some think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. do you agree or disagree with this
Statement ?
In this era ,air and noise adulteration have been booming exponentially , owing to smoke of automobiles . Some populace perceive that, the greatest way to mitigate environmental difficulties is to incline the price of fossil fuels for cars and other vehicles I partially concur with the statement.
On one hand , technology has been booming rapidly, due to that, utilisation of automobiles are being balloon and cutting down the flora. Some human beings ponder that , decreasing price of fuels is the good approach to solve environmental issues, thus there are multitude of benefits : First and foremost, higher petrol price should lead to less smoke and air pollution ;lower rate of respiratory diseases; less chances of climate change and it is beneficial to drop down noise pollution. The epitome of this is Delhi, where administration has started even odd number rules to mitigate Global problems also price of fossil fuels has been increased owing to that, there ,having less noise pollution and oxygen level is increasing vis -a' - vis to previous time.
On the other hands ,nowadays cost of fossil fuel is grown by authorities , nevertheless , people are used with motor vehicles , which are worked by fuels. However , oil industries have driven many factors to develop the nations, so increases in oil price is affecting upon economy of country. There are some other way to mitigate air pollution such as planting more trees are helpful for solving global warming ,government should encourage to locals for using public transport and government would keep less travelling cost. For an example ,Canada where, crucial decision has been taken by people, for having free adulteration. They are using modern and improved means of transport such as electrical and solar cars also mode their way in Modes of transport.
To concluded , increasing crude oil's price will be mitigating to environmental issues while , high price should affect in income of nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29166666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79134375969 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.0900286103 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.090909091 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3636363636 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.01903807615 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260745692339 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931866757076 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795798972794 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15580776622 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792770944995 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.