Nowadays, teens have to suffer from stress and pressure from every source. Discuss the problem and suggest measures to fix this issue.
At presents, young people have many teen stress and pressure. I will show you some main problems about teen stress and pressure and show possible solutions to fix the issue.
Firstly, I will show you pressure from studying. Some pressure are high expectation from parents, from yourself and from many exams. Your parents respected exam for highschool and you feel stress. If you didn't come up to expectation, your parents would feel dissapointed. From that, you will feel pressure or you will have something need to try hard. If you love studying, you won't feel pressure, you will want to study more and more. Some solutions to fix this issue is you can talk to your parents about problems, you don't need make pressure on yourself.
Secondly, some pressure from social, it like as friends, relatives, present. Your friend laugh at some problem of yours, they think you are not normal or some thing wrong. Your relativse are make more pressures than your parents. If you passed, everyone would happy and congratualed and if you didn't pass, your relatives would dissapointed.
Some people have many pressure, they study very much, always they study from 7 a.m to 10 p.m for study at school and extra class. Most of parents always compare your child with other people.
In conclusion, teenagers have many stress and pressure nowaday so we should feel happy in study.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...u pressure from studying. Some pressure are high expectation from parents, from you...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... highschool and you feel stress. If you didnt come up to expectation, your parents wo...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...alk to your parents about problems, you dont need make pressure on yourself. Second...
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Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...yours, they think you are not normal or some thing wrong. Your relativse are make more pre...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...would happy and congratualed and if you didnt pass, your relatives would dissapointed...
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Line 4, column 18, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun pressure seems to be countable; consider using: 'many pressures'.
Suggestion: many pressures
...s would dissapointed. Some people have many pressure, they study very much, always they stud...
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Line 4, column 130, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the parents') or simply say ''Most parents''.
Suggestion: Most of the parents; Most parents
....m for study at school and extra class. Most of parents always compare your child with other pe...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun stress seems to be countable; consider using: 'many stresses'.
Suggestion: many stresses
...people. In conclusion, teenagers have many stress and pressure nowaday so we should feel ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89655172414 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40113677002 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543103448276 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.4733891886 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.0 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216995785368 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876825382979 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731414153466 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132216434741 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055593397319 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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