Should recreational marijuana use be legalized Pros and cons of legalising marijuana

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Should recreational marijuana use be legalized? Pros and cons of legalising marijuana.

The issue of legalizing recreational marijuana use has been tackled for quite a time. Despite the fact that the drug is illegal, a cohort of people have tried it or have been using it on a regular basis. Is there any sense of prohibiting it at all? Opponents of legalization believe there is. They contend that marijuana use harms the user physically and mentally and should be strongly discouraged. Proponents provide a huge list of advantages among which is economic growth, decrease of street crime and safer use.

Some people believe that legalizing marijuana can boost the economy, first of all, by creating thousands of jobs and, secondly, by collecting in tax revenues. Such industries as tourism, banking, construction, real estate and a great deal of others will benefit from legal marijuana.

However, other people argue that societal steep costs of marijuana outweigh its tax revenues. For instance, paying for increased emergency room visits, medical care, addiction treatment, adverse impact on health from secondhand smoke far exceeds revenues legal drug raises. These people are of the opinion that marijuana generally hurts society.

To sum up, people who support legalization believe it will add billions to the economy while others stick to the idea that legalization will lead to more medical emergencies, hospital visits and treatment on the taxpayers' expense.

Legalization of marijuana seems more beneficial to me and the arguments are more convincing. I personally believe that it will not only give a push to economic development but also take money away from drug cartels, organized crime, and street gangs. Moreover, there is scientific evidence that marijuana doesn't cause addiction or lung illnesses unlike tobacco and alcohol.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for instance, first of all, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 277.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38989169675 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7903638485 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649819494585 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4614852801 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5333333333 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306297805278 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102979233124 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863818214786 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15453182001 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804189248162 0.0645574589148 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.6 Out of 6.0
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