Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Lately, it has been seen that there is an incline in the proportion of abortion hence it has become a debatable issue among society. Some natives believe that it should be legitimate but others argue it. I think it should be legalized or illegal mainly depend upon the situations. This essay will discuss the reason whether it should be implemented or prohibited by law.
On the one hand, abortion plays a vital role in controlling the birth rate which further protect the nations from threats like overpopulation, unemployment, poverty etcetera. Moreover, unfortunately in some cases foetus is not developed properly in the womb. In this critical situation miscarriage is not only the best way to protect the mother but also safe baby from the difficulties he/ she will face after birth. Furthermore, sometimes especially in case of teenagers where they are not physically and mentally strong enough to give birth so that time termination is the only key to have safe future for them.
On the other hand, there are many countries like developing and non developing nations like India where female foeticide is a major issue. If this is legalized then difference in sex ratio would be rise rather than improving. For instance it is surveyed by Indian government that sex ratio is 8:2. This will have adverse impact on the society as a whole. In worst situation, it will become a business for those doctors who do it illegally. Moving further, abortions have adverse impacts on the health of women such as heavy internal bleeding which leads to weakness and create complications in further pregnancy.
In conclusion, I feel that this is mainly depend on the situation on as both arguments are examined with their evidence so I really think that it can legalized only when the future of nation, mother and baby is concerned
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cases'' or 'case's'?
Suggestion: cases'; case's
...cetera. Moreover, unfortunately in some cases foetus is not developed properly in the...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...here female foeticide is a major issue. If this is legalized then difference in se...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'In the worst'.
Suggestion: In the worst
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... conclusion, I feel that this is mainly depend on the situation on as both arguments a...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'legalize'
Suggestion: legalize
... evidence so I really think that it can legalized only when the future of nation, mother ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, really, so, then, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96416938111 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7509411318 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599348534202 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9554925619 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152565476677 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499485067917 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430263995146 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926109520767 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073168968496 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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