advice a friend who wants to loose the weight.
The statement given asks the advice to be given to a friend who wants to reduce the weight. Let us go through the considerations or the facts to be known before giving such kind of advice.
To start with, it is important to know the BMI of the person before giving any advice to lose the weight. BMI is nothing but the Body-Mass index, which suggests your body to weight ratio is good or not. To explain BMI, there has to be specific weight of the person based on his height which is considered healthy. Loosing weight has been trend these days but it is of great importance not to compramize the health. Thus, in any situation checking BMI before loosing weight is important.
Secondly, there might be specific reason as to why he or she wants to reduce the weight. For instance, if the person the athlete or specifically a runner then it is helpful for them to have less weight which will help them to gain the speed. There can be different angle to look at this. Having more weight is not advisable as it leads to many other health issues such as issues related to obesity and heart. Thus, if the reason is to avoid such complications then I would suggest to consult the doctor or physician before deciding any target.
Finally, considering any given situation, only loosing weight will not help the real cause. You need to monitor food habits as well. If the person is habitual of having the junk food on daily basis which is not advisable for good health and one might end up with increased weight. The diet of healthy food is important to gain the required vitamins, minerals and other essential components. Thus, monitoring food habits becomes crucial. Additionally, one can follow to do the routine exercises which will help them being fit and healthy.
Thus, it is important to know the facts and reasons behind the decision before giving any advice. The comprehensive analysis will lead to the required advice to be given.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ht. Let us go through the considerations or the facts to be known before giving s...
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Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest consulting'.
Suggestion: suggest consulting
...o avoid such complications then I would suggest to consult the doctor or physician before deciding...
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Line 4, column 516, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to be' or 'be'.
Suggestion: to be; be
... routine exercises which will help them being fit and healthy. Thus, it is important...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, as to, for instance, kind of, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65306122449 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45690789397 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495626822157 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9040131086 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.15 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254294310631 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744230637093 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969970586557 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137722160279 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834268549341 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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