The Impact of the Interner on Kids
The development of technology gave us vast access to the Internet. The modern era is mainly occupied by computers and the internet that gave us a convenient living. Making our life more organized, systematic, simple, efficient, and hassle-free.
The internet plays a significant part in making our lives more efficient, however, the presence of the internet can enslave the current generation of children if unattended by their parents or guardian. Pew Research Centre has proven that 60% of kids are on the internet everyday and over the last decade the percentage of kids in social media rises to 20%. There is a risk that should be considered for kids who are using the internet. They are vulnerable to different kinds of influences the internet may bring. It affects their vision and increases fat that can lead to obesity. Sitting long hours staring at the screen lessened their physical activity and barely make time to play outdoors. As a result, they don’t interact more with other people that can affect their social skills making them introverted. It can also affect the growth of the child that can lead to future complications. Setting specific downtime for gadgets and balancing their activities will be useful in forming their holistic being.
The privileges internet provide us since the day it was invented was indeed remarkable. It will imprint in our history and continue to advance as generations pass by. However, the drawbacks can damage life if isolated with children’s maintenance only. The elder around them is responsible for providing the right usage of the internet.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-11-25 | Bungel | 11 | view |
| 2020-10-04 | KarishmaKaul | 84 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...en that 60% of kids are on the internet everyday and over the last decade the percentage...
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Line 5, column 5, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'privileges'' or 'privilege's'?
Suggestion: privileges'; privilege's
...n forming their holistic being. The privileges internet provide us since the day it wa...
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Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding elder'?
Suggestion: The surrounding elder
...lated with children’s maintenance only. The elder around them is responsible for providing the right ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 937.175257732 144% => OK
No of words: 261.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15325670498 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74772753487 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605363984674 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 290.88556701 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7068076896 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0625 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4375 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0482353406319 0.216113520407 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0165402338522 0.0766984524023 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444898762805 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0215811877121 0.12726935374 17% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305204083545 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 41.2886597938 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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