On of the best ways that parents can help their teenage childern prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part time job .do you agree or disagree whit the given statement ?
Parents plays significant roul in every teenage children life,becouse it syage make their life that We can success in our Life ,moreover,In this comtition era, some people assert that parents should help their children to prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part time job, Here,i am parsenaly agree whith this statememt and ellaborate my point in bellow paragraph.
To commence with ,there are many benefits fpr juvenile children if parents ecourage them to take a part time job ,firstly, teenybooper children will know responsibility of parent, for example, they will do part time job ,then they will know about how their parents earn money for them,moreover,if they know responsibility of parents in teenage stage, them they can make theire habits,as a result, if teenage children go to in adult life then they will knowvery well about value of money and parents responsibility.
furthermore, they can save money for feature life ,for instant, when they are doing part time job. then they will earn money, however,they manegment of money that how much money expens for shoping and keep sdudy consiquenly,if they will. adult age than lernt a lesson that we can not success whithout money and they can not take money from their parents.
On the contrarient .some people assert that teenage children will do part time job then they can not do medical and comers study . as, nows days in this comption is increase day by day for example they do part time job then their mind can not consertate with study becouse their mind go to job ,as a result ,if they do part time jo then can not get good markes from study
To recapitulate , as per my above confubulation that parents should ecourage their teenage children to take part time job ,as,. they can know about parents responsibility and thwy will not dependable any body als.
Sentence: Parents plays significant roul in every teenage children life,becouse it syage make their life that We can success in our Life ,moreover,In this comtition era, some people assert that parents should help their children to prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part time job, Here,i am parsenaly agree whith this statememt and ellaborate my point in bellow paragraph.
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Sentence: Parents plays significant roul in every teenage children life,becouse it syage make their life that We can success in our Life ,moreover,In this comtition era, some people assert that parents should help their children to prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part time job, Here,i am parsenaly agree whith this statememt and ellaborate my point in bellow paragraph.
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Sentence: To commence with ,there are many benefits fpr juvenile children if parents ecourage them to take a part time job ,firstly, teenybooper children will know responsibility of parent, for example, they will do part time job ,then they will know about how their parents earn money for them,moreover,if they know responsibility of parents in teenage stage, them they can make theire habits,as a result, if teenage children go to in adult life then they will knowvery well about value of money and parents
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Sentence: furthermore, they can save money for feature life ,for instant, when they are doing part time job. then they will earn money, however,they manegment of money that how much money expens for shoping and keep sdudy consiquenly,if they will. adult age than lernt a lesson that we can not success whithout money and they can not take money from their parents.
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Sentence: On the contrarient .some people assert that teenage children will do part time job then they can not do medical and comers study . as, nows days in this comption is increase day by day for example they do part time job then their mind can not consertate with study becouse their mind go to job ,as a result ,if they do part time jo then can not get good markes from study
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Sentence: To recapitulate , as per my above confubulation that parents should ecourage their teenage children to take part time job ,as,. they can know about parents responsibility and thwy will not dependable any body als.
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