Many people think it is very important to protect the environment, but they make no effort to do it themselves. Why do you think this is the case? What actions should individuals take to protect the environment?
Everyone knows the particular importance of protecting the environment, but no one has any action. It is not only for their thinking but also for their benefit when destroying resources.
In their mind, with the actions of the government for natural environment protection, these actions are not their business. For example, residents usually litter without warning from their own country. As the result, every year, millions of dollars are usually spent on communicating jobs instead of country development.
Besides, because of welfare, people could destroy the resource seemingly endless, such as a thousand area of forest was destroyed by a human for factories or agriculture or hundreds of species of wild animals are killed that could lead to extinction just for the sake of human enjoyment. This might lead to an increasing in temperature when carbon dioxide is too abundant due to insufficient plant metabolism.
From my point of view, because I know that no one wants to live in an artificial world, everyone should consciously protect the environment and the things around us. it is not only the responsibility of the people who control the country but also of members of that nation.
In conclusion, the superficiality of the people and personal interests that man, even knowing the importance of nature, still takes action to destroy it. Just your responsibility can help nature greater again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding things'?
Suggestion: the surrounding things
...consciously protect the environment and the things around us. it is not only the responsibility of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28318584071 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95140372193 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637168141593 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0644696095 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.545454545 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15163559548 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544038098503 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546684230968 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842120155895 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436294949344 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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