Nowadays parents push children too much to succeed. Is it good or bad?
I agree that recently parents are forcing children to prosper. Many parents think it is good but personally it is not good. parental schooling is essential for future of children however the parents should not intermingle dicipline and slavery. if parents confuse two things it will be an atrocious juvenility for the kid.
I am beginning with, parents keep vigilant look upon their child's life for a number of reasons. The most vital factor is thinking about their children's future. I am able to comprehend that parents want a good future for their children. Fulsomeness is always harmful, in this case it will also be detrimental.
Secondly and most important thing is that parents attach importance to academic performances. Nevertheless however if the child does not do it gratuitously, then existence turns into a dungeon for the kids. The consequences of this are able to range from depression and suicide. you are not able to foresee anything from a child who is not alive.
consequently, while parents pressure their children for their betterment and welfare, it is able to often lead to unexpected circumstances. I think parents should not be so tight on their kid. you can lead a horse to water but you can not make it drink.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08612440191 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84940181093 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569377990431 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5863557464 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.8666666667 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9333333333 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186699146854 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737396347057 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734691998768 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121419667423 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820556185602 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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