The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The given graph provides the data regarding the number of tourists witnessed by a Caribbean island between the years 2010 and 2017.
Overall, the trend of visitors in the Caribbean island is increased in the given period. Among the tourists, the craze to stay in a cruise ship has increased while less tourists are staying at island.
Now turning to the details, the popularity of Caribbean island among tourists has increased between the years 2010 and 2017.In the year 2010 only 1 million of people visited the island. However, the number of tourists increased in next seven years, around half a million tourists incremented each year from 2012 to 2014 while the dramatic rise in the number of visitors was in 2017 when 3.5 million people visited the island, which was almost 1 million more than the previous year 2016.
As illustrated in the graph, mainly visitors choose two destinations for their accommodation. Either they prefer to stay on island or they stay on cruise ships. The cruise ships are much favorite among the tourists while the stay on island is less preferred by the visitors. In year 2017, out of 3.5 million visitors, 2.5 million stayed at cruise ships while rest of the 1 million stayed at the island.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun tourists is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ay in a cruise ship has increased while less tourists are staying at island. Now ...
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Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...creased between the years 2010 and 2017.In the year 2010 only 1 million of people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, regarding, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88095238095 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44217014381 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485714285714 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.33156521 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.888888889 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320341687764 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155815400296 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136137438392 0.0843802449381 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24426032717 0.15604864568 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141203106639 0.0819641961636 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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