Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
This is indisputable that modern technology is a boom for today's generation and we cannot deny the fact that it will solve the most important environmental issues that society is facing currently, I strongly agree that automation will help us to save our environment.
Firstly, water purifiers and sewage treatment plants are the greatest innovation. Earlier, we used to face scarcity of water which is a good fit for human consumption. But now, thanks to these purifiers we are able to conserve the essential nutrients required in drinking water. While on the other hand, we can also recycle the sewage water by installing these treatment plants and can use water judiciously which is safe enough to be released into the environment.
Secondly, nowadays most of the big cities are worsely effected by pollution due to excessive vehicles on the roads and are switching to eco-friendly cars. This revolutionization of machinery has not only impacted the environment positively but also increased our standard of living.
Thirdly, the production and utilization of renewable sources of energy like solar and bio have tremendously reduced our dependency on natural resources like coal and petroleum. With the advancement of this technology, we are able to use renewable energy sources a great extent. In Bangalore, a lot of offices are using solar panels to meet their demand for electricity.
To recapitulate, it's not very difficult to come to a consensus that technology acts as a blessing for our environmental problems and we should use them in the right direction and evolve the world as a unit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to meet their demand for electricity. To recapitulate, its not very difficult ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07318041609 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603846153846 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8098175662 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.909090909 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165027120069 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500323171233 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869829034303 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975935291432 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109899385588 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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