People are wearing western-style clothes rather than the traditional type of clothes. Is it a positive or a negative development ?
In the modern era, there are many people who choose to wear western dresses instead of traditionsl clothes. And I consider it as a positive effect on the society. This esaay will discuss the reasons and positive effects of this development with a feasible conclusion.
To embark, there are plethora of reasons why people select modern clothes as a part of daily life. Firstly, it provide a comfort to people who wear them. For instance, sports people wear trousers and shirts becuase they feel comfortable in that when they are performing their sport in ground. Secondly, the western dress give people a sense of gentle look and suits their personality. Thus, they wear them in work and social life while, they wear traditional clothes at any function or occasion.
On the other hand, this advancement should be seen as a progress in the nation. Nowadays, more and more people opt western clothing which may contribute greatly to fashion industry. Therefore, the economy may rise and this can be result in job creation and a high level of employment in clothing industries. Another positive effect is that the introduction of modern clothes enhance the value of traditional wears. As the people wear coat-pants in their daily workholic life they prefer to wear traditional dresses on important days.
In conclusion, I firmly reiterate that the western clothing is a positive advancement because with the passage of time the lifestyle of people has been changed due to which there are many amendents in their taste and preferences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03937007874 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69143948245 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547244094488 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5900359745 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4285714286 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340721499302 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113411248502 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531188305231 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201440458478 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420959976926 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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