People are wearing western-style clothes rather than the traditional type of clothes. Why is the case? Is it a positive or negative development
In the world of globalisation,denizens prefer western attires over traditional wears. I believe it is mainly due to wave of westernization and changing lifestyle of people.morevove,it has a list of positive effects. This essay will examine causes and impacts of this development along with a reasonable conclusion
To commence, globalisation simultaneously with stream of westernization has been effecting every aspect of life. Therefore, it has been also altering cloth preference of natives.Moreover, in contrast to traditional wears the variety of western-style clothes us huge. As well as they are more comfortable, comparatively to old school clothes. Last but not least, workplace dress-code is another factor. Most of the gaffers ask employees to wear casuals or formals inspite of traditional wears.
Consequently, world is a diverse place cumulated from people from various backgrounds and cultures. Every culture is distinctive from other. Thus, westernsed clothes bring a sense if equality in society. Also,folks can easily gey mix up with each other. Furthermore, this trend gave birth to a new textile industry.As a result, job opportunities has been increased.To illustrate, a survey of RBI indicated thar growing textile industry is creating 1 lakh new jobs every year.
To recapitulate, I concur that human nature always demand for a change and this advancement in clothing preference leads to an ample of benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, in contrast, as a result, as well as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61926605505 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.6067212038 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701834862385 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.1989158667 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2307692308 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206184752724 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607109574699 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757578051922 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107935625581 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627476180233 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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