IT IS SUGGESTED THAT EVERYONE WANTS TO HAVE A CAR, A TELEVISION AND A FRIDGE. DO DISADVANTAGES OF THIS DEVELOPMENT FOR SOCIETY OUTWEIGHS THE ADVANTAGES.
In modern era, people are living with advanced technology, where they becoming intelligent. Today, electronic equipment such as television, fridge, and vehicles are necessary for them. I think that it is beneficial for the modern lifestyle and individuals status purpose but Here, some negative aspects also available.
To begin with positive aspects, firstly, electronic products such as television, refrigeration, and automobile vehicles, which are an integral part of human life nowadays. For example, a fridge is a source of food storage and preserving of some dairy commodities like is milk, ice cream, and so on. Additionally, TV is a great reference for information and knowledge, and too for entertainment. People gain information and news around the worldwide. Further, a car is sufficient and relaxation transportation and time-saving ting, and also known as a status symbol for individuals. Moreover, having own car or transport provides people an edge as they are not dependent on a schedule of city transport and traveling to remote areas could be possible as well.
On the other side of the coin, a few opposing aspects aspect should also be considered. since the invention of the electronic devices radio, television, people have become sluggish. instead of outdoor activities, in free time they choose to stay home and watch their favorite shows. With such habits in a society, people might forget the social values and norms. In addition to that, a slothful attitude, especially of a juvenile will be dreadful and without sports activities, they are more prone to diseases.
To recapitulate, I believe electronic equipment and vehicles are vital components of modern time. These necessities lessen the workload from lives of people and that time could be spent on other productive activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ilk, ice cream, and so on. Additionally, TV is a great reference for information ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ther, a car is sufficient and relaxation transportation and time-saving ting, and...
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Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'aspects'' or 'aspect's'?
Suggestion: aspects'; aspect's
... other side of the coin, a few opposing aspects aspect should also be considered. since...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...pects aspect should also be considered. since the invention of the electronic devices...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Instead
...elevision, people have become sluggish. instead of outdoor activities, in free time the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36140350877 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04929440496 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3968917298 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0808991746963 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0255491184747 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310734590431 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.042804058337 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426769664651 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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