Your mentor recommended you to learn a new language and gave you contact details of a teacher. Following his advice, you need to write a letter to the teacher. In your letter say
• What is your motivation to learn a new language ?
• How can the teacher help you ?
• When you will be ready to start ?
I got your reference from my English Teacher, Mrs Sangeeta; for learning the French Language. I am looking forward to settled abroad. By October, I might fly to Canada future progression. As I want to make my career into Technical Sales Engineer, it involves speaking and presentations for the clients. Along with English speaking population, many prefer French for communication in Canada. So to avoid in language barrier for my growth, I am keen to learn French
Currently, I am working as a Technical Sales Engineer, however, due to Covid-19, we are working from home. So after office hours, it would be better if you can take my lessons. By the end of June, I am planning to appear for French Language Proficiency Test. To get better grades, can you provide me the contact of one of your students?. That would be of great help to improve my linguistic skills.
By the end of December, I will be relatively free from work pressure, so by January, we can start as per your availability. For extra practice, I can be available on weekends as well. You can contact me on +91xxxxxxxxxx, for further discussion.
I am looking forward to your early response.
Your's faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
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| 2021-01-17 | parabshreyas | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8487804878 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93433995671 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59512195122 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0114696937 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.2666666667 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193641908314 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669881971305 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640523928805 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110749767157 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276513523518 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.