It is sometimes said that people should be enouraged to get married before they turn 30, as this is best for both individuals and society, Do you agree or disagree?
Few people opine that everyone one should get married before they turn 30, because this has more pros for community and oneself. I completely agree with the aforementioned statement as getting married at young age can bring secure feeling and commitment towards one another.
Marrying someone between the ages of 20 to 30 has many advantage. It helps an individual to be selfless which has become very rare to see these days. Once a person is married, they start caring for each other and express unconditional love at young age. Also, having moral support from a partner at tender age can help one achieve the most difficult goals. Although, achieving mile stones alone can give pride, having some to celebrate the victory will add more meaning to success. In addition, marrying at right age is important because, biological clock is ticking. Women who are above 30 find it very hard to conceive due to their age and stress related issue which, leads to fertility issue. For example, in my country number of fertility center has increased 5 times compared to decade ago and doctor’s claim that 65% of women and men have difficulty conceiving naturally and the main reason attributing to this is age.
On the flip side, there are few reasons why few opt to postpone wedding is because, they have ambition and targets to achieve. Marriage can stop or slow them down from achieving their goals. Due to family commitment one has to compromise and sacrifice their aim. For example, it is recorded by Family welfare organization of India, that 87% of women did not pursue their passion, because they got married at a young age and family became their priority. Furthermore, staying single can give financial stability and one can be independent and take decisions on their own terms which, would not be possible if they have someone dependent on them.
In conclusion, bachelor life can give all the freedom to achieve things at onus own pace and terms. However, love, caring for one another and medical fitness outweighs advantage of being married.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
...omeone between the ages of 20 to 30 has many advantage. It helps an individual to be selfless ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9450867052 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53293485168 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627167630058 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7785401742 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.647058824 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169432754026 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556944962822 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740297303729 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119654613398 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909599527032 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.