"Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is no doubt that nowadays government fund a lot of money for people's treatment. In spite of this, there are a lot of people, who have some kind of diseases. And they feel hurt, that is why they can only complicate themselves and others lives. Thus, I agree that prevention is better than cure. The arguments for this can be that: first of all, it is more helpful and economical to teach people how to prevent yourself from diseases than to treat them. And the next is that sometimes it can be late for cure. So, these two arguments will be proven in the given order.
It is clear that pr...
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