There have been many inventions in human history, such as the wheel. Some people think the most important thing is the Internet
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is debated that the internet is the most critial creation that ever be invented throughout the history of human kind. This essay totally agrees with that statement because Internet has revolutionised the way we do things and it makes significant contributions to unite the world as a whole.
The Internet has changed the world by serving numerous purposes. Nowadays, the entire process of exchanging paperwork as well as consultation can be conducted online, which reduces so much effort and time. Many businesses from every field can benefit from the Internet and speed up their progress even greater. Nevertheless, not only does it affect firms and organizations but it also make so much impact on life of every individual that it would be odd if one be segregated from the online world. For example, a smartphone that has connected to the Internet can be a labour-saving device, with which people can do online shopping at home as well as finding information for study purposes.
The invention of Internet also highlighted the desire and essential of connecting every parts of the world. It is nearly impossible for one can contact or keep it touch with people living in other side of the world 30 years ago predominantly due to the cost of telephone, but nowadays we can do it within a minute with the existence of the Internet. This opportunity means that not only do we keep informed but it also proof that the Internet is the greatest era-changing invention as it can do what other creations in the past can’t. For example, in 2018 HongKong saw a protest between students and the government that without the Internet, the world could not be known to advocate and protect these juveniles
In conclusion, Internet is not the sole invention that allows modern civilization to proper, it is for sure the highlight of human capabilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94871794872 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87067142632 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.9203636738 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.363636364 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3636363636 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197328781879 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821675943402 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566993617022 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138678859682 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691491729201 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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