The chart below shows the percentages of industry sectors contribution to economy of India and Turkey in 2000

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The chart below shows the percentages of industry sectors contribution to economy of India and Turkey in 2000

The set of pie charts compare the proportion of industrial sectors who contributed to the economy of India and Turkey in eight different categories.

Overall, the agriculture sector was the largest contributor to the economy of India; whereas, in Turkey, healthcare and education are the highest contributors and finance, business and other are the lowest.

In India, agriculture is responsible for the most significant share to contribute to the economy which is nearly a quarter (24%). Trade, utilities and transportation (12%). Interestingly, leisure and hospitality, healthcare and education were contributed similar share of seventeen percent each. Lastly, construction, manufacturing and finance, business and other participation were under 10% which are 3%, 8% and 5% respectively.
Discussing Turkey's contributions are healthcare and education and, trade, utilities and transportation where the sharing of former is 17% and letter is 16% respectively. Moreover, leisure and hospitality, and agriculture share the same number of contribution to their nation(14%). The lower contributors are government, finance, business and construction.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cipation were under 10% which are 3%, 8% and 5% respectively. Discussing Turkeys...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, moreover, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 6.8 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03680981595 4.92477711251 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5062624434 2.65546596893 132% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564417177914 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.45097560976 131% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2507924523 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243685344103 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958706565447 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115101787864 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179533045084 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119072112871 0.0819641961636 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 61.2550243902 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 10.3012195122 135% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.46 11.4140731707 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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