Nowadays the rate of unemployments in society is higher and hingher What is causes of this problem

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Nowadays, the rate of unemployments in society is higher and hingher. What is causes of this problem?

Unemployment is a big problem for individuals, communities and society. It cannot be denied that overpopulation, lack of appropriate qualifications and Covid-19 pandemic have been responsible for joblessness.

In the first place, increased population is one of the main reasons for unemployment. Obviously, when overpopulation occurs, the number of applicants are much more than the number of job. Therefore, many people find difficult to have a job. According to the statistics from National Statistics Bureau, in Vietnam in 2018, the population increased which makes the unemployment rate reached up to 25 percent compared to in 2015.

Secondly, it is the lack of qualification for employers which results in this problem. In fact, many graduates are unemployed due to their lack of not only appropriate qualifications but also necessary skills for their job responsibility such as communication skills and group working skills. For example, a survey conducted by Social Journal published that in 2019 in Vietnam only 10 percent of university leavers had a job, meanwhile the rest did not seek for a job because they are deficient in these practical skills.

Finally, on roof of high rate of unemployment is originated from Covid-19 pandemic which we are facing with now. Indeed, during Covid-19 pandemic, many governments all over the world imposed social distance method to prevent from the spread of the pandemic. Many public areas, enterprises, restaurants had to closed for weeks even months. In addition, residents were required to stay their home instead of gathering or going to work. Although this method is very effective on districting the spread of the pandemic, the livelihood of people were seriously threaten at that time.

In conclusion, there are some main reasons for unemployment including the increased population, the lack of qualification for applicant and the global pandemic. To tackle this problem some practical and effective solutions should be taken as soon as possible. I strongly believe that if the government and residents have co-operation each other to address the problem, it will be improve soon.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43413173653 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15028255592 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6259212373 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.764705882 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.70588235294 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110316906223 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400305298793 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460814981032 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065011477212 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188398824029 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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