Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. Give your opinion.
As we define culture is a combination of beliefs, values, and the expression of those, one’s origin is undeniably a factor to an individual’s culture. The true question is “To what extent, does a person’s home country have impacts on their culture?”. And by addressing this question, I will dig into both sides of the argument.
It is not groundless to believe that a person hometown has a great impact on their awareness of culture. Since we were a child, we absorbed everything around us: the language, the cuisine, the religion,… Such information shaped our culture and identity at a very young age, and those factors are not come from a person or a family itself, but from a community called country. For example, if a person were born in Vietnam, they would be familiar with a family-oriented attitude and a more diverse cuisine with full of vegetable when compare to other individual that came from another country.
On the other hand, the explosion of internet is a major force to form a person’s culture nowadays. People now are exposed to a variety of entertaining products and information from all over the world because of the omnipresence of internet. Thereafter, an individual’s culture in the present is more diverse. Additionally, the popular of displacementism are pushing people to travel more then their ancestors. Hence, their knowledge about the world would be widen through every trip, leading to a subjection to new influences.
At the end of the day, one’s country of origin does affect on his culture. However, the more they explore, the more they merge in with other cultures. This multi-culture movement performs as a key point to shape a new generation that wiser and more modest everyda
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, then, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78892733564 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76190468326 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560553633218 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 289.0 20.2975951904 1424% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1384.0 106.682146367 1297% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 289.0 20.7667163134 1392% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 65.0 7.06120827912 921% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243711250633 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.243711250633 0.084324248473 289% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138146530994 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259723152289 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 145.6 13.0946893788 1112% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -221.86 50.2224549098 -442% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 116.0 11.3001002004 1027% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.98 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.74 8.58950901804 253% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 117.6 10.1190380762 1162% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 10.7795591182 538% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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