Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and believe that change is always negative. Others, however, prefer to take risks and think that change is always a positive thing.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
People today have the possibility to transform their lives in countless ways. However, while some people argue that making changes can cause problems in life, I agree with those who feel that making changes results in only favorable outcomes.
On the one hand, some people argue that change always leads to hardships. They claim that when you perform an action repeatedly, you can predict what its outcome will be and, therefore, are unlikely to receive any unwelcome surprises. Moreover, routines can also make you more efficient. For example, if you work in the same office your whole life, you will be able to complete tasks much more quickly because you have built up so much experience over time.
On the other hand, I believe that making changes in life brings more rewards than remaining static. In today’s world of constant technological change, people who try to hold onto the past and resist change end up becoming redundant. Even if an employee wanted to work in the same company for their whole career, it would be unlikely that they would be able to do so without seriously upgrading their skills. Furthermore, from the perspective of personal development, if you never altered your lifestyle, you would never give yourself the opportunity to grow as a person. I would argue that even though some choices you make in your life might have negative consequences, it is worth experiencing these downsides in order to gain the possible benefits of change and development.
In conclusion, although people who stick to the same routines experience less difficulties, making changes in your life is the only way to develop as a person. Therefore, on balance, I believe that change of any kind should be viewed as positive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02068965517 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6493352766 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6129727734 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182915703314 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751805796148 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514812975848 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122630886442 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307234179777 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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