Some cities ban private cars from entering the center and force people to use bicycles and bused. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages.
The entrance of personal motor vehicles is prohibited, in some cities, and individuals have only one option to use the bicycles or public transports like buses to commute. In my opinion, yes, the advantages of this policy outweigh its disadvantages. In further discussion, reasons in the support of its merits will be discussed.
firstly, banning the use of private cars inside cities would act in curbing pollution problems. On burning, the fuels such as petrol and diesel emit carbon-di-oxide, which is the major cause of air pollution and global warming. Hence, shifting to public transports like bus metro trains will reduce the number of vehicles on the road, as a result, lesser contamination in the air will take place. However, the bicycle will help to eliminate this problem to a greater extent. For instance, many cities in developed countries have banned diesel cars, and within a short period of time, a greater improvement in the air quality has been observed.
Secondly, with the greater number of cars and motorbikes, a major issue of traffic congestion and road accident has arisen. This difficulty would be easily eradicated if private vehicles are banned. Furthermore, road accidents are directly related to the number of automobiles. Moreover, in less congested situations, the use of bicycles will be easier. For example, in the recent lockdown, the road accident count decreased tremendously.
To conclude, the policy of banning private automobiles will provide more benefit as it helps to curb pollution and traffic issues by providing alternatives like buses and bicycles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44979919679 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06874089665 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59437751004 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5601737483 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.384615385 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208637089424 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722528845496 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651823826505 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121921194038 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350652010485 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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