Nowadays There Is An Increase In Social Problems Involving Young People Because Parents Spend More Time At Work
This is a fact that nowadays the communication gap between parents and children has been increasing due to many potential reasons. I am strongly believe that parents spend less time with their offsprings and most of the time they spend at their workplace. I am going to explain some causes of this phenomenon.
Admittedly, In today’s materialistic world people has hectic schedule as both genders are working to maintain their standard of living and women are contributing in the household expenses similar to men. That is the most important reason why they have less time to spend with their children. To explain more, working whole day make then tired and they need to do rest when they come back home. So they take rest because they have to go work on time in the morning and instead of talking with children they take rest. As a result, children are not nurtured properly and they feel alone and stressed as parents do not give and time and ask for their problems because of the greed of earning more and more money. What is more, taking much stress makes them victim of incurable diseases that leads to other health disorders. Secondly, indulging in illegal activities is the big cause of this trend as when parents do not take care of children and do not keep an eye on where their children go and what they do then they choose bad company. Most importantly, because of immaturity the children motivates to do offences as they are encouraged to commit crimes by giving greed of money that promotes juvenile delinquency. Finally, if parents would give time to their children then they can learn important human values from them such aa respect elders, help each other etcetera. Consequently, they can become responsible citizens of the country and also makes the society a better place to live.
Besides this, quality education is needed for survival in this fast paced world; however, when parents focus only on earning money then they forget their children in their daily routine. As a consequence, they remain deprive from they human values that they get from their children as well as failed to get proper education. Additionally, the trend does not only harm the health of the pupils but also impacts their nature aa they grow. Last but not least, unemployment is prevailing because of uneducated people as parents are not nurturing their children properly then there can not be holistic development of children.
To conclude, Although earning money is required for survival in this time of inflation yet i think that parents should spend time with their children.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2148.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 438.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90410958904 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52175125139 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502283105023 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3443006064 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18214136929 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673131754642 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591579513583 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131472396109 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555321486016 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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