Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.Discuss this view and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
some people believe that not eating meat or fish is better not only for them but for the world as a whole. this can be a great thing because it can help in preserving nature. Every animal deserves to live their life on this world. I will elaborate my views further ahead and will clear that it is truly a marvellous thing for our wildlife as well as the whole planet.
vegans are those people that does not eat any kinds of animal meat including dairy products also. As they consider their is life in everything present on the earth. Firstly, their ideology is that eating other creatures kind of portrays you as cruel and insensitive towards the mother nature. Secondly, they consider organic foods to be a greater source of nutrition. As I can say plant based nutrition is far better in terms of having full poultry diet.
In addition to that science is also proving this fact that the people who eat dairy products are much likely getting less protein than the ones who are on complete vegan diet. it is considered as a far better alternative in terms of healthy supplements for better and strong physique. Even our celebrities and athletes are also nowadays promoting organic food supplementation in the market. In some countries the laws are also being given preference for promoting veganism over full fledged non-vegetarian diet.
In the end I can say that it depends on a person's mindset what he wants to eat but veganism is a greater alternative in the future for better health and life style. Scientists are proving the fact and the results are there.
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...of animal meat including dairy products also. As they consider their is life in ever...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69090909091 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5189372021 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549090909091 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6435439066 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26863960368 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086385560626 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090554248812 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154862032911 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748674322695 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.