Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
A language is a basic medium of communication that can be a drawback to a person who is not familiar with the local dialect and this can make living difficult. This essay completely agrees with the notion that not knowing the locale of the general public can be disadvantageous and will be explained further.
The key aspect is social, where a person is unable to form friendships with the people around them as language becomes a major barrier. As there is no common ground between a person and other citizens, it is a hurdle until the language is learned. To illustrate, a person who has been transferred from one country to another that does not share the language can be tough on the person, as converse basics of the new language need to be learned.
Coming to the practical issues that a person might face could be the interaction for basic products and knowing the best location to purchase the commodities. Once the language is mastered basic interaction becomes easier and so does living as a new world is opened up until then daily interactions like commuting and shopping for groceries. For example, an immigrant will not be familiar with the stores that give the best deals and will only gain experience.
To conclude, for a person who has migrated to a new country the initial days can be overwhelming if the language is not known and this can socialise with the native residents as well as meeting daily needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 241, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...tion that not knowing the locale of the general public can be disadvantageous and will be expl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.752 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70530146194 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.1876043752 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7777777778 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167360940455 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784950818394 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531218357827 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116335438028 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487623806878 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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