The passage and lecture are both discussing benefits from using franchising technique. The author claims several advanteges of franchising. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in the article. She thinks, non of these propposal are correct.
First, the writer staes, franchising help owner to buy supplies and goods from reliable suppliers, and save franchise owner from risk of serious lossses. The professor in the lecture contradicts this statement. She says, franchising might inforce owner to buy their goods from limited suppliers. These suppliers may give their services overprice. Moreover, cheap goods may be allowded by otherv suppliers.
Second, author elaborates on saving a lot of money on advertising when using franchising. This is because the sells already and popular recognize brand. The professor in the other hand refutes this argumrnt. She mention. Owner already take 6% from the price for advertisment which may costb more than doing their advetisment for their progucts by themselves.
Finally, The author points out to security as one advantege of franchising. The professor has another bopinion. She says, this is most risky. we can buy from previous owner.
The passage and lecture are both discussing benefits from using franchising technique. The author claims several advanteges of franchising. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in the article. She thinks, non of these propposal are correct.
First, the writer staes, franchising help owner to buy supplies and goods from reliable suppliers, and save franchise owner from risk of serious lossses. The professor in the lecture contradicts this statement. She says, franchising might inforce owner to buy their goods from limited suppliers. These suppliers may give their services overprice. Moreover, cheap goods may be allowded by otherv suppliers.
Second, author elaborates on saving a lot of money on advertising when using franchising. This is because the sells already and popular recognize brand. The professor in the other hand refutes this argumrnt. She mention. Owner already take 6% from the price for advertisment which may costb more than doing their advetisment for their progucts by themselves.
Finally, The author points out to security as one advantege of franchising. The professor has another bopinion. She says, this is most risky. we can buy from previous owner.
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| 2021-06-05 | talelaldabous | 65 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...aims several advanteges of franchising. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., non of these propposal are correct. First, the writer staes, franchising he...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... First, the writer staes, franchising help owner to buy supplies and goods fro...
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Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'mentions'.
Suggestion: mentions
...e other hand refutes this argumrnt. She mention. Owner already take 6% from the price f...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...opinion. She says, this is most risky. we can buy from previous owner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, may, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 1373.03311258 73% => OK
No of words: 184.0 270.72406181 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45652173913 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75733683601 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 145.348785872 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641304347826 0.540411800872 119% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 419.366225166 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 21.2450331126 47% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8342193756 49.2860985944 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.0588235294 110.228320801 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.8235294118 21.698381199 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.41176470588 7.06452816374 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370104614997 0.272083759551 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109807500337 0.0996497079465 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125978222731 0.0662205650399 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25988611399 0.162205337803 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.282601278011 0.0443174109184 638% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 53.8541721854 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.2 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.7273730684 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.498013245 57% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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