You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about:
- what course are you doing now
- why you are not satisfied with that course
- what course would you like to change to
Dear Mr. Chilamkurti,
I am John Smith currently enrolled in Master of Information Technology.Since I started attending lectures and labs from a couple of weeks ago, I found this course not very practicable. Course contains obsolete contents relating to hypothesis and theory only not keeping abreast with latest curriculum. In addition to this, Labs are not encouraging with use of memorized syntax.
As far as I know, I probably can change my course to another one before census date-25th July for this ongoing semester. Moreover, As I have strong proclivity for programming areas, Master of Information Communication Technology includes practicable, industry oriented, updated programming subjects. Equally, Labs are very fascinating and zestful. My friends who joined this course have already started programming on latest technology and security features on web applications like payment gateway, encryption and decryption methods etc. which make me more zealous to change course.
Therefore, my humble request to you is to sign on the subjects I wanted to enroll which goes with my passion and aspirations.
I apologize for any inconvenience to you and faculty.
Sincerely
John Smith
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I am John Smith currently enrolled in Master of Information Technology
I am John Smith who enrolled in Master of Information Technology currently
I found this course not very practicable.
I found that this course not is very practicable.
Labs are not encouraging with use of memorized syntax.
Labs are not encouraging to use memorized syntax.
my humble request to you is to sign on the subjects I wanted to enroll which goes with my passion
my humble request to you is to sign on the subject I wanted to enroll which goes with my passion
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Different Words: 125 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.678 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.366 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 50
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 10.307 7.5
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.079 0.07
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