Some claim that studying abroad has great benefits for a student’s home country.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that going abroad is beneficial for the home country student. In my opinion, I completely agree with this statement, there will be much more benefits for the country than the losses caused by these students who may emigrate.
First, when students go studying in another country, they would help boost their home country economy in the future. After graduation, they return home and find a job in their nation. Because of their understanding about foreign cultures, it helps them to work in multinational companies. For example, when they are successful and have high income, they can pay taxes to their country to help develop their country's economy.
Secondly, when students study abroad, they could promote their home culture to the world. There would be a lot of extra-curricular activities like the exchange between students about their cultures of origin or the introduction of student countries. For instance, at the RMIT International School in Melbourne, the school organizes the Multicultural Festival, students wear their national costumes, sing and dance traditional songs from their country, and students present their country's food to international friends.
In conclusion, although the students decide to go to abroad, there are great advantages for the country of origin. Enhancing the economy of student’s country and promoting their culture. Therefore, people should encourage them to study abroad.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49099099099 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84843224757 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612612612613 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8277982331 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.583333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2669760859 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120363826517 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715157715854 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195212543009 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660966761803 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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