Essay topics:
Some people believe that competition drives young athletes to perform at their best, while others believe that competition discourages those who are not athletically talented from participating in organized sports.
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| 2021-06-17 | techgeek | 66 | view |
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| 2020-07-28 | miloni22 | 58 | view |
| 2020-07-14 | parth tank | 70 | view |
| 2019-11-29 | farhadmoqimi | 54 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 395, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...l. While the competition may discourage some of the athletes but it is a primary requiremen...
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Line 3, column 1163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tes to shape their careers effectively. It can be inferred that, while many peop...
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Line 4, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e towards it will likely bring success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2329.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 436.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34174311927 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93562481672 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525229357798 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 749.7 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2250365975 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.904761905 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7619047619 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283805163304 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896242328565 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10659215437 0.0758088955206 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208056810916 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111718444552 0.0667264976115 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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