Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to use the land for human needs like farms, houses, and factories than for saving endangered animals.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Earth has massive animals variation, from the ancient histrory to modern world lots of animals extinct and lots of survive till days. That is a earth evolution cycle and its natural. However, In modern time human intervene in this cycle by arising artificial crises for endenger animals. So, I disagree with the statement that it is important to use land for human needs and give three reasons why I hold this position.
First of all, It will effect the bio-diversity of animals community. In eco-system, various animals lives and they effect each other life in direct or indirect ways. For example, if we use lands of endergender animals, they will not survive. As a result, it will stress on other animals as they directly or indirectly rely on them. It will broke harmony in animal community. So, it is necessary to keep lands for endenger animals for maintaing bio-diversity in nature.
Secondly, If we use lands of endeger animals it will the abuse of animal rights. Animals also have the right to co-exsist with human beings. We can't simply ignore their rights, thats why animal rights group asking goverments to maintain these rights. And international community encourge to keep land for endenger animals rather than human use.
Finally, endenger animals helping our environment rather destroying it. Human are the responsible ones for making environment poisonous by making factories by deciminated endenger animals land. If the lan is not used then it will be helpful for environment because the tress will not be cut. Which is important to keep enviornment clean and fight with global climate change.
In conclusion, the endenger animals are the intregal part of the environment. So, conseving their lands will be prime concern for us. Thats why I disagree for using land for human use which will b devastating for nature and it will make enviroment stressful. Endenger animals keep the environment clean and maintain the bio-diversity what is the need of nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
Earth has massive animals variation, from the ancient histrory to...
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Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... and lots of survive till days. That is a earth evolution cycle and its natural. ...
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Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...this position. First of all, It will effect the bio-diversity of animals community....
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'break'
Suggestion: break
...tly or indirectly rely on them. It will broke harmony in animal community. So, it is ...
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Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ight to co-exsist with human beings. We cant simply ignore their rights, thats why a...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...gs. We cant simply ignore their rights, thats why animal rights group asking govermen...
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Line 9, column 135, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...eir lands will be prime concern for us. Thats why I disagree for using land for human...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09509202454 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70100516165 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515337423313 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2850280725 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.5 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306598458512 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101368054112 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900045108126 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196830682163 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380260539485 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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