You are promoted as the senior manager of your firm. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter you should say
–how you felt in the firm
-what additional responsibility you think you have now
-express your gratitude to the employer
Dear Mr. Smirnov,
I am writing to thank you for the promotion and for the trust shown. Our team is highly professional and friendly and I am happy to be a part of it. However, being a leading specialist in our company I always felt that I was able to improve many aspects in the working process of our department.
Therefore, taking into account that my new responsibilities include management and planning of new projects of our department, I suggest focusing on surveying the terrain using unmanned aerial vehicles. It is relatively cheap and will save a lot of time. In addition, the resolution of the images obtained from a drone is significant and lets us identify small objects such as wells and power transmission columns.
Once again, I really appreciate that you decided to appoint me to the position of manager. I will do my best to live up to the trust.
Best regards,
Ivanov V.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, therefore, well, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 1615.20841683 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 157.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7898089172 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89270164872 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68152866242 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 506.74238477 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.9444168598 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5555555556 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0899387063938 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314574189919 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492913070621 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604129393202 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299364729732 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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