some people believe that teenager should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time . This can be benefit teenagers and the community as well . To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Well, there is not any denying that the charity can provide distinct benefits to the society as well an individual, so in this regard, a part of society opine that the volunteer work should be done by the all the adolescents in their leisure time for the based community along with themselves. I strongly endorse the given notion. The arguments favoring my contention will be enunciated in the impending paragraphs.
The foremost argument to support my agreement that why it should be done, is socialization of the minors. When all the children will indulge in the activity of providing help to needy people in their free time with groups and organizations then they will interact more. This will eliminate the hesitation and develop their communication skills which will help them to connect with public easily and conveniently. To cite an example, a recent survey of the Cambridge University revealed that around 25% of total population are easily find their feet in mixing with public since they had worked and went through the proceedings of helping underprivileged ones.
Allied to this, the experience of these functionalities in the little age, all the young person can expertise themselves and some of them can take it as their profession which will result in more and more volunteers for the society’s well-being. On the top of it, by proceeding consistently in this field various social workers can provide aid to foreign nations in their difficult times such as disasters, natural calamities and this can help their own country to foster strong and healthy international relationships with them.
By analyzing, taking a social work as free time activity by the youth not only will conclude the brushed up skills of them but also strong relations of the territories with others; therefore this ideology is fully supported.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: found
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17799352751 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89125206565 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598705501618 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.3020061519 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.333333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207035441674 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664319352806 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060061340747 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104971595325 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717293061051 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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