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Failure is proof that the desire wasn't strong enough. To what extent do you agree with this statement?. Give reasons for your answers.
Some people have raised an issue that failure is the result of lack of desire. I agree for some extent to this idea, although, the definition of failure need to be redefined.
People sometimes mistake the definition of failure. For many of them, it is the opposite of succeed. However, the idea of failure can be horrendous. Common people might afraid doing a new thing or make an invention as the result of phobia of being failed. As the result, they will merely doing a thing to avoid disappointment. This can be the start of lack of interest, as well as desire.
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the definition of failure need to be redefined.
the definition of failure needs to be redefined.
Sentence: For many of them, it is the opposite of succeed.
Description: The token of is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to of and succeed
Sentence: Common people might afraid doing a new thing or make an invention as the result of phobia of being failed.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to might and afraid
they will merely doing a thing to avoid disappointment
they will merely do a thing to avoid disappointment
individual who have no interest
individuals who have no interest
Sentence: However, many of them just simply live their life without achieve anything.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to without and achieve
Sentence: It is because there is no particular thing to be considered as a trigging thing to be gained.
Error: trigging Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.211 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.98 7.5
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
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Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 270 350
No. of Characters: 1288 1500
No. of Different Words: 148 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.054 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.77 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.668 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 94 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 69 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.211 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.98 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.368 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.289 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.466 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.091 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5