More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information. Therefore, there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
When advancement have became inevitable in this competitive world, the role of technology make an crucial role in framing the developmental blueprint of nation. Millions of floks are ulitizing there time on computer and gizmos to aware about data. Thus, there is no longer need for physical books. I firmly subscribe to the writer notion and reason of my inclination is articulated in upcoming paragraph.
The predominant justification to support my ideology is that the computer provide each and every information about the specific problem in fraction of time, however in physical book masses ought to purchase the book to obtain the knowledge and that will be too costly. It is interesting to note that the whenever a person is away from they accommodation and urgency occur for getting information then in that time mobile phone aid us to get it that in mobility and accessibility. For instance, in New Zealand, appropriate more than 80% of citizens is being using all types of latest technology.
Considering further, this is the reasonable to the extend that the ultimately it would likely get benefit to the environment by using computer to acquire data. In other words, whenever people use any physical versions and after using that thing then people throw the printed books on the road or somewhere else some people also burn out that thing and it release the detrimental gases from the paper and impact to the nature, rather than performing this all activities information should be acquired by computer. As a ramifications, the rate of infirmity toward the human being will likely to rise in future. To epitome, in India, almost well above 40% of nature had been got infected.
In conclusion, Although to maintain bygone days cultures related to books is an paramount one, yet be modern in the life as well as to spoil the nature is not an accurate thing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
When advancement have became inevitable in this competitive world, t...
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Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...tive world, the role of technology make an crucial role in framing the development...
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Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...more than 80% of citizens is being using all types of latest technology. Consi...
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Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...% of citizens is being using all types of latest technology. Considering further, thi...
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Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ring further, this is the reasonable to the extend that the ultimately it would likely get...
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Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[2]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
... further, this is the reasonable to the extend that the ultimately it would likely get...
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Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'releases'?
Suggestion: releases
... people also burn out that thing and it release the detrimental gases from the paper an...
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Line 5, column 459, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'activities'' or 'activity's'?
Suggestion: activities'; activity's
...nature, rather than performing this all activities information should be acquired by compu...
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Line 5, column 517, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a ramification' or simply 'ramifications'?
Suggestion: a ramification; ramifications
...tion should be acquired by computer. As a ramifications, the rate of infirmity toward the human...
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Line 5, column 599, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ard the human being will likely to rise in future. To epitome, in India, almost well abov...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... In conclusion, Although to maintain bygone days cultures related to books is...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ygone days cultures related to books is an paramount one, yet be modern in the lif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, thus, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97452229299 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8062294867 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601910828025 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.166996699 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.166666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166904630615 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050925678163 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049540514905 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826768147616 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432553411247 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.