Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
From the first civilization until now, the Homo sapiens have developed every aspect of life that allows us to be free to choose anything in it including food, appliances as well as many things else. In my opinion, I agree with this statement because our lives have been changed comfortably and conveniently thanks to technology.
Firstly, in education, people now have more options to choose from than in the past due to their interest to study and work in different sectors. Back in the olden times, the most popular studies were engineering or medical whereas others occupations did not have much potential and recognition. These days, art courses such as music or designing have become one of the most well-known and gained more support from residents. Additionally, in the past, there were less entertaining things than now. At that time, the television only had some channels for citizens to watch whilst now people provide numerous entertaining tools such as websites or appliances. For instance, when I was a child, residents used to have two animation channels which were CN and Disney, whereas now countless shows and series are launched on different digital services like Netflix, Disney+, or Prime.
Besides, technology has also influenced the invent various ways to interact. It is the result of lacking communication in the past when there used to be one telephone per central street of big cities and the price of each call was unaffordable. however, thanks to the technology improvement, our lives have been better than ever with wireless internet, various mobile phones, and thousands of utilities. Consequently, people now are able to communicate freely, through platforms like WhatsApp, Facebook, or Instagram at an easy pace. For example, when there is someone in an emergency, his friends and family can call an ambulance as well as different services.
To conclude, I suppose that our generation is blessed when we were born in this time with technical assistance and grow without any limitations of substances
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...Besides, technology has also influenced the invent various ways to interact. It is the res...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...he price of each call was unaffordable. however, thanks to the technology improvement, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, i suppose, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18484848485 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83576949229 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3675165541 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.214285714 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134911426657 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428090920764 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451429978893 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862412968764 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395045391535 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.