Learning English at school is often seen more important than learning local language if these are not taught many are at risk at the dying out in your opinion it is important to learn English should we they try to ensure the survival of local language, if so, how?
The English language has dominated the global business and intercutrural interaction for more than two different countries and it threatens to eliminate several languages. I strongly believe that the students also need to learn English the cultural of regional language are equally important
To commence with, the English language has acted as catalyst in promoting globalisation inter country trade also need to this language for the interaction. English language has created a common platforms for everyone. In the absence of this language global business would have been negligible as compared what it is today.
However, the local language has a unique place in society because it represents the history of culture and heritage as well as maintain the personality of persons own identity.Language is a foundation of culture in the absence of local languages the cultural history and heritage will disappear in feature for forever. Individuals are linked to listen song stories and written stories in their language but some words are not pronounced in English language.For example, Sikh in India also related to Punjabi language and Jews of Israel use the Hebrew language if their local language will disappear in future then the our next generations unable to read the Guru Granth Sahib and Torah.
To recapitulate, through English languages in a necessary for global business and interactions. Apart from this local language are not in neglected us, because it's represent our mother tongue, so individual as well as the government should concern about the both languages and making them to ensure these teaching language in the schools, colleges and universities.
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- The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organisations in 2008 and 2014 some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn about current events however other believe that they can learn news better through other media discuss the bot 56
- some people think that newspaper are the best media to learn and get information from while other believe that the internet is a better source discuss both view and give your opinion the chart below gives the percentage of social media users by area in ja 56
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also, but, however, if, so, then, well, apart from, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40458015267 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92059312932 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557251908397 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.906209275 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.0 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.75 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256697835763 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119359697224 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415805908121 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170620648388 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355923991047 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 50.2224549098 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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