Some people think that car is the best way to travel in the cities. However, other say that bicycle is more lucrative than cars. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The lifestyle of masses has undergone dramatic changes over the couple of decades. Presently, some people assert that cars are the supreme method of travel in the cities. By contrast, others believe that travelling by bicycles is worthwhile idea as compare to travel by cars. Here, I would like to account for both sides of view in my own perception.
There are manifold points to shore up the former view. First and foremost, people can save their precious time if they travel by cars in the cities. To justify, people can cover long distance under the less amount of time by travelling the car with its fastest speed. Therefore, traveling by cars allows masses to manage their time to devote on others responsibilities. Besides this, car is luxury, comfortable and entertaining mode of travelling and therefore people have tendancy to travel in cities by car. For example, cars not only provide supreme sitting arrangment, music and air conditioning but also contains power steering, break, air bags and so on
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 169.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99408284024 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69664128762 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662721893491 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5624744898 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.4 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300611312161 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114485657505 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716806514914 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232522205959 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174377778961 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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