You recently left something at the bus station. Write a letter to the manager of the bus station.
In the letter
- Describe what you left
- When and where you left it
- Ask some questions about how you can get it back.
Dear Sir,
I am write this letter because I left my bag at the Brampton bus station on Friday evening at 7pm as I am in hurry.
This bag is small and brown color. It look like a suitcase and you can see the right side is little damaged. It got a handle and sticker with my name card. This is important bag for me as I keep some office papers inside.
I am returning from work and was at Brampton station from 6- 7 pm on Friday 16th July 2021. My bag left in the bay area near the red and blue seats on that day.
I can come any time to picked up my bag. Also what ID you need to return my bag, I will bring it with me. Please call me on 647-111-1111 if you found my bag please.
Thank you and please call me.
Your’s sincerely,
H. P. Boti
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am write this letter because I left my...
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Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'written'.
Suggestion: written
Dear Sir, I am write this letter because I left my bag at th...
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Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'looks'?
Suggestion: looks
... This bag is small and brown color. It look like a suitcase and you can see the rig...
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Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... can come any time to picked up my bag. Also what ID you need to return my bag, I wi...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: YOUR_S[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Your' or 'Yours'?
Suggestion: Your; Yours
...lease. Thank you and please call me. Your’s sincerely, H. P. Boti
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u and please call me. Your’s sincerely, H. P. Boti
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 597.0 937.175257732 64% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.87662337662 4.54256449028 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00169644699 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649350649351 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 174.6 290.88556701 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.41237113402 78% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7742636666 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 49.75 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8333333333 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22077537224 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710795687453 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640283028744 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107077588626 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671518421269 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.3 8.37731958763 39% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 101.59 70.7449484536 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.1 7.45979381443 28% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.34 8.71597938144 50% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.67 7.59969072165 75% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 41.2886597938 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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