Some people believe that study is important to success. However other say that there is no relation between study and success. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Study plays a phenomenal role in masses life to provide a better future for thir family and life. Presently, some people assert that study is most phenomenal to their successful career. By contrast, others advocate that there is no role of study for success. This essay intends to account for both side of view in my own perception.
There are manifold points to shore up the former view. First and foremost, people are studying hard to make their future bright and luxury. For example, masses do hard work on their study for getting a well paid jobs in order to earn their bread and butter. A great deal of study knowledge provide best job opportunities to people. In this way, they can get well pay from their job and fullfill all the desires of their family. Moreover, people can earn their name and fame by taking part in quiz competition at the international level by doing hard work on their study. As a result, study is fruitful for masses to built the piller of success.
Numerous point can be put down to endorse the latter view. Initially, some people successful without doing study. To justify, some people have a lofty amount of field experience and they built the business in the in this field so that they are successfully. Needless to say, the advantages of success with experience is more fruitful for some people.
To recapitulate, undeniably, success without study have some positive outcomes. However, study is more fruitful for masses. In my own perception, individuals need a large amount of knowledge for their success.
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| 2021-07-26 | Ankit Bhoriwal | 56 | view |
| 2016-09-30 | harshdeep singh | 83 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83018867925 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56035441655 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.856098004 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.1111111111 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7222222222 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272686072498 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105704960395 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796708901729 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190332152317 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054244975438 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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