Prison is the only truly effective form of punishment, because it separates criminals from society. What extent do you agree or disagree?
Legal punishment continues to be controversial, as we are aiming for a society of modernity and equality. Some people believe that imprisonment is the most essential because it keeps dangerous individual isolated. However, I personally disagree with the statement, and I will explain why.
First of all, detention sometimes does more harm than good. For example, when kept in jail, individuals tend to be influenced by other inmates, thus learn toxic mindset from them. This results in which former criminals are likely to commit more crime after being released. Furthermore, while not all crime are severe and repetitive, such as first-time pickpocket, either educational or economic punishment appears to be the better option. For instance, social service participation let troublemakers understand how they can contribute to the community and even receive wages in turn. Meanwhile, fine increase government budget, which helpfully supports urban infrastructure improvement.
Finally, while imprisonment have some unexpected effects which I have mentioned, it emerges as a terrible selection to punish juvenile delinquents as well as people with psychiatric disorders. Being detained, these people can become victims of violence and sexual abuse, since there is usally little supervision for in-room relationship in jail. Besides, rebelious behaviours in teenagers mostly stem from social media reflection and poorly self-awareness. So, instead of arresting them, we should use a more educational method.
Of course, this is not to say that prison is unnecessary, because some evils are unforgivable so they deserve lifetime imprisonment, or even worse, execution. However, I strongly believe that many detentions can be altered by better punishments, as long as they are beneficial for not only individuals but also society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, of course, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73626373626 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15352493333 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0239690488 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100481827508 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295498224338 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024568829087 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624550300713 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229268798553 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.