Nowadays most people are not as fit and active, as they were in the past.what are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solution.
Statistical studies hold by experts, the world over, have revealed that a great deal of people are not fit and inactive, as they were back them. Perhaps, the can be attributed to a range of causes, but the question arises, does it have some fix? Let's delve it deeper.
Needless to say, this ugly growth has been driven by countless factors and the foremost one is people have the sedentary lifestyle and they prefer to work on machine, for which they have become no work out and pay no attention on own body. Coupled with it, junk food fuel to fire this implies, everyone's have the poor eating habits.because, they do not like to prepare homemade. Instead, they prefer to eat junk food , reasonbeing, it is easily available in the market for example, burger, pizza, spring rolls, momos are soon .
Having said that, it order to get it fixed, some endeavour's can be made at least. the most effective measure could be the inclusion of regimes. It is an onus on the regimes to prevail enlightenment that is possible via diverse channels ranging from social to print to audio irsual. Apart from it, seminars or webinars can be held to know the clear benefits of healthy lifestyle along with it individuals need to do their bit This means should take part in daily activities. Also, it is admitted that,everyone's life has hectic schedule, but they need to prepare home made food it is healthy and hygienic.
To cut a long story short, it does not seem sedentary life and no attention own body irrational to wrap up saying that through and drove their undefinable growth, nevertheless the government and people ought to go hand in hand to iron this problem out.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, apart from, at least, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82332155477 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78317505328 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650176678445 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.609113927 49.4020404114 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.625 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.375 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124551595805 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049562795176 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371041116648 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725818019068 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284152779562 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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