In many countries, people wear more western-style clothes (suits and jeans) than their traditional clothes. Why? Is it a positive or negative development?
According to the state, in numerous nations, most of people promote to wear western outfits in comparison to traditional and ancient dressup. There are plenty of reasons fo this criteria and it seems to me as positive development. Both the views points are discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are plethora of causes which shows the preferability of individuals towards western outfits. The first and foremost reason is their comfortability. Individuals feel more comfortable in british slag such as jeans, tops and so on. Because, such items are not made with heavy ambroidery and are also light in weight, which make masses more satisfying while doing any piece of work. Moreover, these types of outfits are ultra modern and attractive in their appearance. Due to this desirability, youngsters prefer to wear western clothes which also shows great positive impression in their personality and status in front of society and they feel more confident.
Apart from that, this notion shows positive progression because there are plenty of reasons which are in favour of this criteria. First of all, if individuals prefer western outfits then they also aware from the culture of foreign nations. Because of that, this creates a superior picture in their lives. For instance, in british countries, individuals are more open minded. And by following this, people become able to demolish the discrimination in their society in all manners which represents a positive aspect of that criteria. In addition, this also promotes business opportunities. Because, if individuals prefer western clothes in large number then the demand of these items become increases. Due to this, many british industries become set up in the nation of one another which results to positive progression.
To recapitulate, there are plenty of reasons due to which people prefer western fashion such as comfort aspect and I personally believe that this notion makes positive development in such aspects as discrimination avoidance and promotion in business sector so on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: most of the people; most people
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: light
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, then, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33128834356 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85867847196 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515337423313 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.300414275 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5555555556 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192366499311 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587203907124 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486169687527 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120359028614 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023603247662 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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