Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In present-day society, we are busy with our daily life. To be more exact, we are competing with each other to lead a good life. Consequently, each second is immensely electable to us. People are having a hard time reaching on consensus whether work for three days per week is an excellent idea or five days. A lot of folks hold the conflicting idea. As far i am concerned, i believe that work for a long time within 3 days is more effective. There are a plethora of reasons that support my point of view and i would explore a few of the most important ones here. To begin with, in this competitive world, we have to prepare ourselves by gaining various knowledge.As a result, sufficient time must need to do it and it is possible if anyone manages their time. It is obvious that it is only when he or she do job with 3 days per week. For example, i am a fresh graduate student. I do not excel in basic skills like Ms word, PowerPoint etc. For one thing, i am looking a job where i get manage my time and thus i make my prepare.
Secondly, the rest of the days i can spend valuable time with my family. There is no doubt that family is an asset for any person. For instance, during my graduation life, i did a part-time job. The place i worked was a very far cry. So most of the time of the day we had to stay out of my home. So, it was blessed for me that i got a part time job and the rest of the days i can look after my family. Having said this, however, doing job five days a week is not a good idea.
Finally, given the factors i outlined above, i may reach the b conclusion that if you lead a decent life, then task for 3 days in a week.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, no doubt, as a result, for one thing, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.00607902736 5.12529762239 78% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36488228303 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565349544073 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8249586913 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.45 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323983716232 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924341299901 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742276531076 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213922302056 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431931649083 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 13.0946893788 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 50.2224549098 161% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.68 12.4159519038 46% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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