In the past people believed that the human race was steadily making progress in all areas of life; nowadays there is less certainty that it is so. In what areas do you think the most important progress has been made so far? In what areas more needs to be done?
The journey of human beings from forest survival to flying by aeroplane highlights the massive success of mankind over a century. Presently, increasingly technological development is satisfying almost every need of people in every walk of life. However, human requires to invent some more ways to deal with existing global menaces. Here, I would like to throw light on some magnificent inventions so far and needed discoveries for forthcoming generation.
To set in, the introduction of aeroplanes on account of technology has revolunised travelling, trades, relationships between nations, internat...
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are other astonishing inventions
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