Making decision is a crucial thing that all people concern about. The controveral is whether we have to share others in taking this decision or not. This can be weighed in differnt ways. Amidetly, some people believe, no one have a right to share them their choises, since, this is their private life. In my vantage, I concur with this statement, we should take other advices to decide our choices. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reason to explain my point of view.
To begin with, the important reason why we should ask our relative to to give as their point of view to enable us to make correct decision. Every one in this life expert in a spesific field and not familiar with others. Therefore, all persons need help hence they are not experts in all parts of life. Take my real example, onces, when I have decided to buy house, first, I looked for it by on self, because this will be mine, and no one can knows which features that my favoir. After a hard work, I can not get a final choise. My friend advise me to ask help from real state, one who is expert in this field. I listen to him, and know, I appreciate to my friend and real state for their help to make this important decision. As a conclusion, we can figure out the benefit from taking other opinion when making a n impotant decision.
In addition, the other reason spring to my mind. It is very impotant for young people to share their family like father and mother when making big decision like which major should theyn take. This is mainly due to the fact that, they do not have enough kowledge and experience to make such a paramout chioce. For instane, when I was in high school, I was confusing about which major should I take in acollage. Therefore, I prefered to ask my parents to help me in this situation. My parents have a broad experience from their long life. Furthermore, they know my weakness and strength. So, they explain to me advantages and disadvantages of each field and give me freedom to select my favorate field. as a consequence, I attained to school and gratuated with high sores which made me get a good career.
To wrap up, I strongly believe, people should nevr make a big decision without take their relative advices inorder to get a perfect result.
Making decision is a crucial thing that all people concern about. The controveral is whether we have to share others in taking this decision or not. This can be weighed in differnt ways. Amidetly, some people believe, no one have a right to share them their choises, since, this is their private life. In my vantage, I concur with this statement, we should take other advices to decide our choices. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reason to explain my point of view.
To begin with, the important reason why we should ask our relative to to give as their point of view to enable us to make correct decision. Every one in this life expert in a spesific field and not familiar with others. Therefore, all persons need help hence they are not experts in all parts of life. Take my real example, onces, when I have decided to buy house, first, I looked for it by on self, because this will be mine, and no one can knows which features that my favoir. After a hard work, I can not get a final choise. My friend advise me to ask help from real state, one who is expert in this field. I listen to him, and know, I appreciate to my friend and real state for their help to make this important decision. As a conclusion, we can figure out the benefit from taking other opinion when making a n impotant decision.
In addition, the other reason spring to my mind. It is very impotant for young people to share their family like father and mother when making big decision like which major should theyn take. This is mainly due to the fact that, they do not have enough kowledge and experience to make such a paramout chioce. For instane, when I was in high school, I was confusing about which major should I take in acollage. Therefore, I prefered to ask my parents to help me in this situation. My parents have a broad experience from their long life. Furthermore, they know my weakness and strength. So, they explain to me advantages and disadvantages of each field and give me freedom to select my favorate field. as a consequence, I attained to school and gratuated with high sores which made me get a good career.
To wrap up, I strongly believe, people should nevr make a big decision without take their relative advices inorder to get a perfect result.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Making decision is a crucial thing that all people concern about. The...
^^
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...people concern about. The controveral is whether we have to share others in takin...
^^
Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...t reason why we should ask our relative to to give as their point of view to enable u...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 443, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'know'
Suggestion: know
...cause this will be mine, and no one can knows which features that my favoir. After a ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 812, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t from taking other opinion when making a n impotant decision. In addition, t...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion when making a n impotant decision. In addition, the other reason spring to ...
^^^
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n spring to my mind. It is very impotant for young people to share their family l...
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Line 3, column 707, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...e freedom to select my favorate field. as a consequence, I attained to school and...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sores which made me get a good career. To wrap up, I strongly believe, people s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, therefore, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 22.412803532 290% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 30.3222958057 195% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1373.03311258 135% => OK
No of words: 416.0 270.72406181 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45913461538 5.08290768461 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.04702891845 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39627533763 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 145.348785872 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490384615385 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 419.366225166 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 3.25607064018 645% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.25165562914 479% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 13.0662251656 184% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3523410168 49.2860985944 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2916666667 110.228320801 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06452816374 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395093470935 0.272083759551 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118773222875 0.0996497079465 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127727065405 0.0662205650399 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27582379136 0.162205337803 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.204484728364 0.0443174109184 461% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.3589403974 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.8541721854 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 12.2367328918 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Making decision is a crucial thing that all people concern about. The...
^^
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...people concern about. The controveral is whether we have to share others in takin...
^^
Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...t reason why we should ask our relative to to give as their point of view to enable u...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 443, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'know'
Suggestion: know
...cause this will be mine, and no one can knows which features that my favoir. After a ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 812, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t from taking other opinion when making a n impotant decision. In addition, t...
^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion when making a n impotant decision. In addition, the other reason spring to ...
^^^
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n spring to my mind. It is very impotant for young people to share their family l...
^^
Line 3, column 707, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...e freedom to select my favorate field. as a consequence, I attained to school and...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sores which made me get a good career. To wrap up, I strongly believe, people s...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, therefore, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 22.412803532 290% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 30.3222958057 195% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1373.03311258 135% => OK
No of words: 416.0 270.72406181 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45913461538 5.08290768461 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.04702891845 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39627533763 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 145.348785872 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490384615385 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 419.366225166 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 3.25607064018 645% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.25165562914 479% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 13.0662251656 184% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3523410168 49.2860985944 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2916666667 110.228320801 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06452816374 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395093470935 0.272083759551 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118773222875 0.0996497079465 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127727065405 0.0662205650399 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27582379136 0.162205337803 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.204484728364 0.0443174109184 461% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.3589403974 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.8541721854 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 12.2367328918 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.